Monday 24 March 2008

Help Please

I know this is very short notice, but if there is anyone alive out there...if anyone can hear me...please have a look at this story I'm turning in tomorrow for Creative Writing and Psychology!!! I'm beginning to lose my mind writing about people who lose their minds... does the story make sense?

STORY


2 comments:

Rob Smedley said...

Don't panic! :) It's a good story. I don't know anything about psychology, but the story itself is solid. :)

You've got a grammatical error on page 2 tho: 'Goodness you're floor will be soaked!'(Sorry to be picky - just thought I'd point it out before a marker got to it)

Unknown said...

Thanks for reading! No need to apologize--picky is what I want at this point :)